If you go to newgrounds.wikia it states that Paragonx9 is a man, although the profile indicates otherwise. Pictures thought to be of Paragonx9 are apparently of his girlfriend.
Regardless, great song. I listen to this on loop when I need to study. The sound at the middle of the 17th second seems a bit overused in songs, but then again you made this in 2006. If it had a "fuller" sound I would have given it the 10th star.
Really good potential but...
There's that stupid beat that starts at 0:26. Now it only becomes a problem at the end of 0:41 when it starts to get irregular. Then it feels like a woodpecker is trying to get in through my headphones.
Honestly if you made with without that beat (or stopped the beat in question at 0:42, or make it not so damn annoying) I would give this a 9/10. I would really like to see you take another whack at this song. I imagine removing it would be the easiest for you if you have other projects you're working on... Hope to see more!
PS: i'd donate but i'm a student and thus so poor I have negative money.
I wish I could remove it.
Like, seriously. It just won't let me. Because it has over 3000 views/listens. But I reeeaaalllllllyyy want to get rid of it.
I may eventually take another crack at it, but not right now. I've got a bigger project at the moment.
And I completely understand the negative money part. I'm a high school student.
On another note, if I do ever take another try, I'll send you a PM about it.
Reminds me of...
Reminds me of trans Siberian orchestra. Would have been nice to hear something longer (but isn't that always the case?). You made this back in '08 so i'm doubting you'll remake this. It has a very interesting sound to it and I like it, good job!
At around 22 seconds in I start to hear a faint ringing noise in the background which is annoying. It only appears at higher notes so it might be my speakers but I don't seem to have this issue with any of your other songs and its consistent with all 3 earphone sets I used. If it wasn't for this i'd have it on a loop for hours at a time. Love to hear this song with this minor issue fixed. Your stuff is always great!
I really like this... you should work to make a version with more "depth" (get more than one set of beats going on)
Thanks for your input! It takes a while for me to have enough time to remake a song though...
Good... could be better
But it always sounds like you're putting too much force when you hit the keys (if you were to play on a piano)... What the left hand would be playing sounds especially heavy.
In my opinion this would sound better if you varied, its good to have hard sounding notes but when you use an instrument like a piano you want to explore softer tones too.
I liked it all except the "intrument" you used for the tetris base sounded annoying after about 5 seconds.
I'm reviewing on the assumption that the intent is supposed to be chaotical. I think there some cool aspects but alot more you could have done.
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